Assignment 5
You will see a slideshow below - it will reveal your final placement.
Comments are below.
Remember, they are posted in alphabetical order based on your Simming Username. You will have to watch the slideshow to know your actual placement.
Remember, they are posted in alphabetical order based on your Simming Username. You will have to watch the slideshow to know your actual placement.
Chell & Ginger Farro
99 points
Photo Quality: 4/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 4/5 Creativity/Originality: 8/10 Gothic Appeal: 10/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 9/10 Total: 45/50 Excellent work again, Chell. Your photo is awesome, it’s grungy and it is very reminiscent of the overall feel of the movie. Your story is dark and very nicely done, however I felt it was the Graverobber talking again and not really your voice coming through. But that was minor. Great work! |
Photo Quality: 5/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 8/10 Gothic Appeal: 10/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 9/10 Total: 47/50 Well can’t find anything to improve this one, Chell. The quality of your photo was up there amongst all the other categories. I was engaged by the story, but it was not as original as I’ve seen from you before, but the quality and the way your expressed your writing was tops. |
Movotti & Midori Movotti
88 points
Photo Quality: 4/5
Model Appearance: 4/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 7/10 Gothic Appeal: 8/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 8/10 Total: 41/50 I’m torn on this one. I love the entry, really, but I also feel like your poem is too similar to the song the Graverobber sings. Buuuuuttttt, I like this so much that I’ll overlook that. Your photo is nice and I like how you styled Midori. He makes a good Graverobber! The people behind Midori are great too – they’re obviously the “beautiful” crowd that would most likely be his best customers. I do wish there was a little more grunge and possible dark appeal to this, but overall, this was good. Nice job! |
Photo Quality: 4/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 9/10 Gothic Appeal: 10/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 9/10 Total: 47/50 Wow this is like a modern-day vampire story/poem. I like that you expanded your repertoire into poetry. Your cutting out has improved so much, Movotti. There’s a slight glow around Midori, but that could easily be reduced by using the clone stamp after you’ve merged the final shot but not flattened it. Your shadowed backgrounds adds to the atmosphere and although dark, Midori and his cohort are all visible, loved it. (Pity your didn’t make your Zydrate iridescent green) That would have earnt you an extra couple of points. |
NShipp & Jasmine Lopez
89 points
Photo Quality: 3/5
Model Appearance: 4/5 Background/Setting: 4/5 Overall Composition: 4/5 Creativity/Originality: 9/10 Gothic Appeal: 9/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 9/10 Total: 42/50 Okay, I think your photo is lacking a little excitement, quality, and overall appeal, HOWEVER – I think your story stole the show!!! Yes, it was short and sweet, but that’s the beauty of it – more importantly, you went a very creative route with your story. Jasmine wasn’t the Graveroobber and she wasn’t Paris Hilton’s character. She was an assistant to the Graverobber and a character that was entirely made up by you! I loved that and I think that is a great way to make your entry reminiscent of the movie without copying anything! I like the attempt at the blue veins, but the “anatomy” tattoo would have rocked with a different font. I do like the pose you chose for Jasmine too. Good work this round! |
Photo Quality: 5/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 9/10 Gothic Appeal: 9/10 Creativity of Mini Story:9/10 Total: 47/50 Jasmine is like a regular, modern-day succubus. Great idea having it travelling through her veins, very visual and original. The quality of this shot is almost perfect. You really are “getting the gist of editing now” and you should be so proud. I like the way the story went and it was slightly different to the others so Well done. |
Vid & Sam Prince
100 points
Photo Quality: 5/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 10/10 Gothic Appeal: 9/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 10/10 Total: 49/50 Wow Vid! This is my favorite of the round. You are fabulous with your photos – which is why I adore seeing you in competitions that are more like this. You put so much detail into your settings and it pays off beautifully. Those models look scary…they think they’re pretty, but man…scary for sure! I love the look in Samm’s eyes – that hair is perfect on him by the way – and I love that you kind of turned the Graverobber into something more. In the movie, he’s definitely a drug dealer, but here, you’ve made him something even more sinister. I love it and I think you did amazingly! |
Photo Quality: 5/5
Model Appearance: 5/5 Background/Setting: 5/5 Overall Composition: 5/5 Creativity/Originality: 10/10 Gothic Appeal: 9/10 Creativity of Mini Story: 10/10 Total: 49/50 Wow how creepy, I certainly don’t want to get to know Sam anymore. I am blown away at the fantastic details you add in every one of your shots. It must take you hours to get such details in your shots…and what you can do with in-game backgrounds, is so wonderful. The quality story and poses are perfect for your story-line. |